Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Progress Update



Hey everybody, so far I've got a handful of silhouette comps for the train station; just playing with shapes.  I want to go over them with line art next to try to capture the feel of the artists we choose.  Also I've got a line drawing for a style test that I can post up in a little bit, right now its too scribbly to understand.

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6 comments:

  1. Cool.

    I'm liking the Center Left one on the first page. The Lower left one on the second page. And the left one on the 3rd.

    Most of these strike me as outdoor; giving some indoor options would be nice. I also feel the ones with tracks are more effective than ones without.

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  2. Hey corryyy!!!!
    I like these. The bottom left on the left page, and the bottom right one on the right hand side.
    I like they they point upwards. I like that their design kind of points to the heavens. It would contrast well with the hell imagery
    of the train.

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  3. could we design it so there is a dip in the tracks? or does it conflict with our time period?
    http://theloopny.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/Lmont-Train-Station-This-AM-03.30.11.jpg

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    1. I don't think it should be a conflict. In Hugo they had a trench for the train in the station.

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  4. These are cool! I like the left one on the bottom page and the bottom right one on the right page.

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  5. cool, thanks for the feedback guys, ill take the ones that people liked and develop those further

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